Wednesday, August 22, 2018

Special Prompt #5 - Natasha Dalton

It was Saturday, I was bored, I was at home because my Nana is on holiday and couldn’t pick me up from school on Friday like she normally does. The mail arrived so I went to get the mail. When I checked who some of the mail was for, one was for me so I went back inside  and sat on the couch to read my mail. I opened the envelope.  As I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face, it was a letter from my Nana that is on holiday.

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