A Broken Bone
Ahhhhhh!!!! cried Lucy call 911 I think I broke my arm.
“OK I will go get Mum” Harper said.
"Hurry!!" Lucy cried
"Mum!" yelled Harper “I think Lucy broke her arm”
“I’m coming" said Mum.
“Why did I do that? Harper thought to herself.
“How did it happen” Mum asked.
“Well we were playing tag and I may have got angry and pushed her down the stairs”
“Your lucky I’m a doctor” said Mum.
“Is it broken tell me tell me please” Lucy said.
“Well yes it is but it is going to be alright” Mum said.
“Ok I will call the Ambulance” said Harper.
“911 what's your emergency?” they said
“My sister broke her arm” Harper said.
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