Monday, August 6, 2018

Special Prompt #3 Olivia

The clock on the wall was ticking, we were all waiting for the school holidays. 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.  “Yay school's out  “we all scream”. I threw my books in the air. My friend Keira was coming to my house today for the night. We got home and started a campfire by the lake , the flames were massive. I got out my lime drink bottle out of my bag and put it on the ground. I regularly had it with me. In the morning there was ice everywhere and we sat on the couch and watched heaps of movies.
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  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 4:02 PM

    Hi I really liked how you added Keira in your story

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